This piece of work is about how you can witness someone getting bullied and not doing anything about it, but you would never know the outcome until you do or say something.
i used to wonder what or why it happened.
To know that it could kill someone so easily, like a shot from a gun.
When you see it happen make sure that you stand up like a captain.
You can easily light up someones day like the sun.
You never know what spark you might hit.
But it can easily get that person out of a muddy pit.
Oh.. this strong piece reminds me the brutality of this wicked world. Yeah, people ain't got any value of someone's emotions cause, they've already buried the worth of their own faith into the grave of wickedness... made by people. I admit, you write very deep pieces. Nice work!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you. I try to put my voice out there, because I know some people may need to hear it. I have v.. read moreThank you. I try to put my voice out there, because I know some people may need to hear it. I have very strong emotions and I love to voice them to the world and hopefully someone will listen.
9 Years Ago
Welcome. Now, I'm sure, you're a kind soul but I wonder, Have you ever tried to make your stuffs out.. read moreWelcome. Now, I'm sure, you're a kind soul but I wonder, Have you ever tried to make your stuffs outta the webs.. to real world?
9 Years Ago
Yeah, but I don't think anyone really even cares to read it.
9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
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Great write... Definitely one that reflects a principal not taught enough. We teach not to bully, but stopping it seems to be a lesson that is lost within our ranks.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I can't agree with you more. Thank you for the review and for reading it!
Oh.. this strong piece reminds me the brutality of this wicked world. Yeah, people ain't got any value of someone's emotions cause, they've already buried the worth of their own faith into the grave of wickedness... made by people. I admit, you write very deep pieces. Nice work!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you. I try to put my voice out there, because I know some people may need to hear it. I have v.. read moreThank you. I try to put my voice out there, because I know some people may need to hear it. I have very strong emotions and I love to voice them to the world and hopefully someone will listen.
9 Years Ago
Welcome. Now, I'm sure, you're a kind soul but I wonder, Have you ever tried to make your stuffs out.. read moreWelcome. Now, I'm sure, you're a kind soul but I wonder, Have you ever tried to make your stuffs outta the webs.. to real world?
9 Years Ago
Yeah, but I don't think anyone really even cares to read it.
9 Years Ago
Umm... sometimes, we think the same like no one cares.. but when you set your creative mind to do "t.. read moreUmm... sometimes, we think the same like no one cares.. but when you set your creative mind to do "to-do" things, you find the crowd of readers around your presence. There's only a need to take a step ahead. So, why don't you try or start writing blogging? Oh.. wai.. you said, you ain't use twitter much. Well, as a friend, I must suggest you to use it because, twitter brings potential readers your way if you use it right. You getting my point?
All the best & you can even let me if you start doing that. Me too like networking cause, networking.. read moreAll the best & you can even let me if you start doing that. Me too like networking cause, networking is very good for calling readers your way.
9 Years Ago
Definatly. I love putting my work out for people to read. Have you checked out, I'm Just Color Blind.. read moreDefinatly. I love putting my work out for people to read. Have you checked out, I'm Just Color Blinded, yet?
9 Years Ago
Yeah.. i've just opened the page a second earlier & just replying you here so... just heading on to .. read moreYeah.. i've just opened the page a second earlier & just replying you here so... just heading on to check it out.
I'm a sixteen year old hard working writer and I enjoy writing every second. I love to give my opinion on things. I've written about three novels and trying to get them published. Please, if you have .. more..