What Would You Do?

What Would You Do?

A Poem by Heartful5160
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This piece of work is about how you can witness someone getting bullied and not doing anything about it, but you would never know the outcome until you do or say something.

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i used to wonder what or why it happened.

 To know that it could kill someone so easily, like a shot from a gun.

When you see it happen make sure that you stand up like a captain.

You can easily light up someones day like the sun.

You never know what spark you might hit.

But it can easily get that person out of a muddy pit. 

© 2014 Heartful5160


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Oh.. this strong piece reminds me the brutality of this wicked world. Yeah, people ain't got any value of someone's emotions cause, they've already buried the worth of their own faith into the grave of wickedness... made by people. I admit, you write very deep pieces. Nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arsh

9 Years Ago

All the best & you can even let me if you start doing that. Me too like networking cause, networking.. read more
Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Definatly. I love putting my work out for people to read. Have you checked out, I'm Just Color Blind.. read more
Arsh

9 Years Ago

Yeah.. i've just opened the page a second earlier & just replying you here so... just heading on to .. read more



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Great write... Definitely one that reflects a principal not taught enough. We teach not to bully, but stopping it seems to be a lesson that is lost within our ranks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

I can't agree with you more. Thank you for the review and for reading it!
Oh.. this strong piece reminds me the brutality of this wicked world. Yeah, people ain't got any value of someone's emotions cause, they've already buried the worth of their own faith into the grave of wickedness... made by people. I admit, you write very deep pieces. Nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arsh

9 Years Ago

All the best & you can even let me if you start doing that. Me too like networking cause, networking.. read more
Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Definatly. I love putting my work out for people to read. Have you checked out, I'm Just Color Blind.. read more
Arsh

9 Years Ago

Yeah.. i've just opened the page a second earlier & just replying you here so... just heading on to .. read more

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Added on December 28, 2014
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Heartful5160
Heartful5160

Sherwood , AR



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I'm a sixteen year old hard working writer and I enjoy writing every second. I love to give my opinion on things. I've written about three novels and trying to get them published. Please, if you have .. more..

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