Beautiful Soul

I can’t even breathe, I feel so hushed
Seep slowly into me, beneath this vessel
Pumping violently, it’s been inactive forever
In the past, it made me feel hopeless
Constantly by blackened souls
They’re just empty shells

Your beautiful soul came in a dream
It wasn’t hard or bright
I wasn’t blind sighted by it
I just looked upon the vastness
And I felt warm inside

She left you on a cold night
Everything around you burned in the dark
Your inner light extinguished
Why couldn’t I light it for you
I was a fool to think for a moment
That your smile was real

Your beautiful soul grew dim to me
I wanted to hold it tight and squeeze it
The ora around your being grew blackened
I just looked upon the sorrow
And I felt cold and wrong

You came to walk in shadows with light again
You held that light within your pure vessel
While being lit by every living thing around you
I looked upon you with loveliness
I couldn’t stop staring into that soul of yours
It burns my eyes, yet I can not look away

Your beautiful soul takes up everything
I know your soul now, it’s brilliant and massive
You lose, you win, you live, and you live
I don’t believe you lost the battle
You just couldn’t find your rifle

I walk the shadows with you now
Holding hands, we light the way
Down this lonely street
And you’re the beautiful soul
That showed me that true love does exist.

Reviews

[Amanda]

a little confusing at times, but a good read.

[Krystal Waters]

This piece is so personal as to you only, but sharing your soul to the world is lovely. There is love, beauty and sweetness... I just read it. Very nice and breath taking in so many ways. I think that is why people have a hard time reviewing this piece. This touches so many parts of our own lives and you put it in a poem and guided us through a part of life. Very well done.

Krystal