SLEEP

Wide awake, can't sleep;
The world on my shoulders I keep.
How I wish my dreams would take me captive.
I planned for this poem to be longer,
But my need to sleep is stronger.

Reviews

[zainul]

Well done.
There is good even in the worst.
You missed sleep for some time,the world got a great poem in return.
Congratulations!!!

[Akira]

Thank you :)

[zainul]

You are welcome :)

[Jeff Bresee]

I just love short and simple. Nice work.

[Akira]

Thanks, me too... Especially when tired! Hehe