Love That Grew From Pain

Heartfelt poem about Love, betrayal, heartbreak, and pain

In the beginning we fell in love

We were young and knew not what it was

 

I grew more and more in love

As she grew closer to betrayal

 

I saw what I wished to not see

Her with a man that was not me

 

That was the end that day

That love had been lost

 

My heart was torn

It felt like I could die

 

But I lived on despite that

Continued with my other love

 

Through the job I loved I fell again

Despite the protest of my head

 

The heart did what it pleased

This is a love that cannot grow

 

At least that’s what I thought until it did

That love that grew from pain

Author's Note

Another poem that just came to me, feedback is appreciated as im trying to hone my writing skills.

Reviews

[Valentine]

A little floaty but the idea comes through. Valentine

[HeartInTheDark]

I dont really understand what you mean, im assuming that the point is hardly making it through? anyway thanks for taking your time to review this i appreciate it.