Is this my red string?

Is this my red string?

A Chapter by HeartInTheDark
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The First chapter of the Novelette "My Love Will Start"

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It was a day like most others, I get home from school and go over my notes from my classes, the normal. You know Like Biology, Chemistry, Physics, Psychology, RE (being a catholic school this is expected), English of course, and my morning class of Maths, my favourite class, yeah whatever I’m a nerd. Once I’m done with my study I head to the shed I set up as my Gym, Uncle Pete has a fair amount of money, he is a lawyer after all, but our place is small cause he hates spending money, he says “Rhys my boy just because you have money doesn’t mean you need to flaunt it, you don’t want to attract gold diggers”. I like to keep fit and am quite Toned, I have been doing this since moving to my current school, and I used to be fat, well not just fat I was on the brink of obesity, such a shame no girls can see this nice body I’ve got now, ha-ha just kidding it’s not like I am that ripped. After a couple of hours out there I go inside shower and head into the kitchen to cook our dinner, I realise I got a text from Uncle Pete. What? He wants me to cook for 4? Why doesn’t he cook then? What are we having dinner with his mates, good thing I bought a fair amount of drinks then, well this is the same as every Wednesday so of course I prepared. He returns about an hour after that just as I finish dinner. I notice that he has 2 Women behind him, one about his age, I will admit she is a very beautiful Women, but the one behind her is who catches my attention. She looks about my Age must be the older ones sister. She has Beautiful deep blue eyes, and stunning red hair, with pale skin as beautiful as the moon. I swear to god that she must have been a goddess in a previous life, of course how could I not fall head over heels for her after that, but that wasn’t enough she greeted me with a smile so great that before I knew it I actually passed out. I dreamt about all the other girls I had fallen in love with in the past and they were horse flies when compared to her, in fact they actually became them, in my dream of course.


© 2016 HeartInTheDark


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Use complete thoughts in a paragraph, do not jump from topic to topic. Valentine

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Added on August 18, 2016
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