Rumours

Rumours

A Poem by Marcus R V Fielder
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A Sestina, of some description, for my creative wrting class. This was unbelievably difficult. You want a challenge, try a Sestina.

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I

I found the house; I’ve dared myself to go inside,

I’ve heard rumours about this place, but they are only rumours I hope,

Rumours about the couple who met an untimely fate,

When an escaped madman cleaved something so perfect,

And covered the walls in innocent’s blood.

II

I walk up to the door, my heart pumping panicked blood,

It rushes in torrents, terrified currents inside,

I might be calmer if it weren’t for the crushing dark,

There will be lights inside, I hope,

Or else this torment will be perfect,

Like it was constructed by fate.

III

Cruel fate,

Much to the disturbance of my much disturbed blood,

As I walk through the door and close it behind, I see the dark is perfect,

Not a flicker of light to be found inside,

So I venture forward and venture to hope,

A forced flicker of bravery will hold back the dark.

IV

One stride from the door and I am lost in the dark,

In the dark so spitefully created by fate,

I see a vision that curdles my blood,

A vision to make me lose all hope,

The pair open their mouths and shatter me inside,

A scream that is high and painfully pitch-perfect.

V

A scream so loud that it covers my scream so perfect,

I break into a run and cut through the dark,

But I am lost in this house, trapped inside,

And by a twist of fate,

I thump into something and my mouth fills with blood,

The pair didn’t hear me I hope.

VI

I look up and perhaps there is hope,

I can escape from the dark that has sealed me so perfect,

I swallow the blood,

I stumble through the dark,

I forget fate,

I escape from the inside.

VII

I look back, into the dark windows of the house,

The couple’s hands wipe blood on the glass, they are trapped inside, I hope,

So I run and I persist to forget rumours.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Marcus R V Fielder


Author's Note

Marcus R V Fielder
I know theres a jumble of modern and archaic sentence structures, but this was genuinely difficult, and i had a deadline.

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Marcus R V Fielder
Marcus R V Fielder

Aberystwyth, United Kingdom



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I'm currently studying at Aberystwyth University of Wales, in my second year of an English and Creative Writing BA. Most of the writes on here are from the various portfolios and tasks i've needed to .. more..

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