Seperate Us, In A Universe Romantic.

Seperate Us, In A Universe Romantic.

A Poem by Marcus R V Fielder
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contemplating feelings of lust, their importance, and realising that lust is all it is, what i have now is much more than lust could ever be.

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Stop time, or create a lonely bubble,
Let’s step inside so I can touch you quick,
No one else aware, so its all fine,
Time stands still so we can cross that line,
there’s nothing you can do to deter,
‘cos I’d still be into you, lover,
countless numbers of time we passed,
and I slipped past like a blip on radar,
And my lust hangs in the air like mist,
my body aches for you so let me touch,
what I would give, just to be part of you,
can’t fix it, can’t stand it, can’t make it fine,
making the choice will cement my story,
and would I change if I knew the ending?

no way.

© 2008 Marcus R V Fielder


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Marcus R V Fielder
Marcus R V Fielder

Aberystwyth, United Kingdom



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I'm currently studying at Aberystwyth University of Wales, in my second year of an English and Creative Writing BA. Most of the writes on here are from the various portfolios and tasks i've needed to .. more..

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