I Am...

I Am...

A Poem by Marcus R V Fielder

i am like a chocolate Easter egg,

i am like a newborn mind,

i am like a great big cave,

i am like an unfilled kettle,

i am like an upside-down cup,

i am like a unused cardboard box,

i am like a disused wardrobe,

i am like a rotten log,

i am like a unused paper bag,

i am empty, i am hollow, i am devoid,

i am the type you've no need to avoid,

because i've lost it all, i'm an android.

© 2008 Marcus R V Fielder


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A great way to write a poem, flows really well and i like the ending that your an android.
Dawn

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Marcus R V Fielder
Marcus R V Fielder

Aberystwyth, United Kingdom



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I'm currently studying at Aberystwyth University of Wales, in my second year of an English and Creative Writing BA. Most of the writes on here are from the various portfolios and tasks i've needed to .. more..

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