Bringing down Kings

I wrote this right after I got in a fight with my father. It's about a type of person, someone who not only thinks that they can't be wrong they know.

To all of them
Who holds there minds
as all truth and all fact
You should know the real truth
 that your head is quite fat
when whats coming is sown
the right things to do are here
the fear of right always shown
now is gone to bring up old fears
never will there be more
never will there be less
A reason to see things
words always ignored
Bringing down kings
There will always be more
Always here
or there
Ripe for the picking
you can't see what I mean
you lean out to touch it
never wanting to be seen
holding your truth close by
You make a grasp
and yet once again you fail see why

Author's Note

I feel a lack of flow

Reviews

[Ruth]

I like this - the structure adds to the tension, it is hard after a fight with parents but at the end of the day, we only have them once in this life time lol I do empathise though:) Good poem
xx

[Samuel Dickens]

Not having been witness to the event, I can't take sides, but I will say that parents nearly always love their kids and try to steer them right. That doesn't mean that they are always right, though, because we are all human, possessed of our own strengths and weaknesses.

[Miss Coral]

I was actually thinking "a slight lack of flow" when I scrolled down and saw your note. :) I think that this poem could benefit from being broken up into stanzas and perhaps some capitalization. :p
Otherwise, I thought that this was quite good. Personally, I really liked "There will always be more Always here or there".
Great job. :)