Pain

pain... 

what is "pain"?

pain is when you feel hopeless. when you hurt inside, and cant fell on the outside. 

when you want help, but you are scared of what people might say or think. 

pain is more than just a couple scrapes and bruises... 

it's like a bullet hole full of acids piercing right through your heart. 

I guess what I'm trying to say is I have no way out.

the pain is too strong.

I have a gun in my hand right now.

to my head. 

"I'm tired of this never-ending pain"

"BOOM
My life flashes before my eyes. 

the yelling and screaming won't stop

I fell like that was hell. it couldn't get any worse

I relive my hurt. my pain. my loneliness. everything.

but then I open my eyes.

it never happened. I never ended it. so I just sit here in my blood from my wrist... 

i wonder

shall I live, shall I try, or will I die.

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Srchaud]

Deep and intense. I feel you on the first part, especially, the too scared to let people know. How many times do we fake a smile so someone doesnt judge us weak.
The 2nd part is scary. What if you kill yourself and either it doenst work or you do die but end up in a place as painful as you left.

[Haylie SD.]

yeah, you've got somthing their

[Clips]

It is crisp,well organized and scary. Every word has a purpose.There are times that all you want is for the pain and loneliness to go away. I have marched through your words and they are authentic. Nice job!

[Clips]

You have expressed a word that has different meanings to so ,any people. I believe the words that you wrote. Keep the strength of pain in yoiur thoughts and writings.

[Clips]

Pain. I would have liked to have held your hand during the pain. I have walked your [path. It is well saiod