Haven't decided

We'll first to begin with this is a kind of futuristic story where humans have the ability to utilise the full amount of there brain and go in various adventures

To start before the story the actual concept is of people who have evolved to use the full capacity which takes place in various different forms such as magic phycical enhancements and even animal abilities, ofcourse with change some people adapt for good and help whilst others adapt for evil and it is protagonists and his "crew" which help keep balance. Also with the change some adopt a feel of arrogance whilst the humans have a fear of the unknown this creates a animosity between them. they train in an academy which caters those needs and they go on various assignments if you will to try and keep balance and peace between the two opposing sides. That is the initial concept I have also created a sport and groups please tell me if this is a copy of something else please be honest or if it is too similar. Also the main characters are Adrian Blake angel winters Daniel Payne
Also pay attention to no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes thank you very much I will post the first bits and pieces soon thank you for reading please be harsh and blunt

Author's Note

Please judge harshly no sugar coating if you are going to lie or obscure the truth or be vague honestly don't place a review just give it to me straight and blunt.

Reviews

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Hmm... Interesting concept. I'd not really pick such a book at the bookstore, I'm just not into such stories, but you make this sound intriguing. Though I would like some improved grammar. I'm kind of a perfectionist grammar Nazi, so bad grammar annoys the living crap out of me I'd like to see the actual plot development pretty soon. Don't keep me waiting!

Love,
Vasilees.