Caught in the hurricane.

Caught in the hurricane.

A Poem by Kitten92

I remain in this chaos,

Alone,

Beaten and torn,

I try to build myself up,

Only to fall back down ,

To the darkness i so desperately,

Try to crawl away from,

I dream of a once happier age,

Where i smiling,

accompanied by one special to my heart,

Gone,

The dream fades,

And it is over.

© 2012 Kitten92


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We all have ghosts in our pasts, but ghosts need to be taught their place . . . the same with dreams too. The future has enough problems of its own

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice work
May consider "an" before once and fix spelling of "accomanied" as "accompanied"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple, emotional. Keep up the good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Kitten92
Kitten92

Aiken, SC



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I'm 20 years old aspiring writer unsure of how to fully express all the thoughts and writings I have locked away in my mind but, have been writing for several years. more..

Writing
Eyes. Eyes.

A Poem by Kitten92