How Can I Help You?

How Can I Help You?

A Poem by Hawk Flight
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Please

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The strongest girl I've ever known
is starting to fall apart.
I can see it in the words
of her poems
I can hear it in her voice
on our calls on her way home from work.

She can deny it all she wants
"Hawk I'm fine knock it the f**k off"
But I know my Panda way to well,
to let this go

Pandora, Fenix,
My little sister
How can I help you?

I know my life isnt grand
and I know I can barely help myself
But I cant stand to see you like this.

You're the strongest girl I've ever known
Please  
How can I help you?

© 2014 Hawk Flight


Author's Note

Hawk Flight
To My sister Fenix Flight.

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Sometimes - people resort to profanity, when they have no other way of expressing themselves and the pain they feel, Hawktail. Just go easy about it. Few people like to be helped unless they ask for it themselves.

While it might be painful for you to see her like this, it's even worse if you offer help where none is requested. Let her make the first move.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hawk Flight

10 Years Ago

thank you kindly.



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It's so nice when you have someone that looks under the surface, and still stands by your side despite what they see. That's a true friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hawk Flight

10 Years Ago

Shes like my little sister i will do anything for her
Sometimes - people resort to profanity, when they have no other way of expressing themselves and the pain they feel, Hawktail. Just go easy about it. Few people like to be helped unless they ask for it themselves.

While it might be painful for you to see her like this, it's even worse if you offer help where none is requested. Let her make the first move.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hawk Flight

10 Years Ago

thank you kindly.
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This is a touching poem to your sister.
She might not admit it but she needs your help.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Fenix Flight

10 Years Ago

You guys are f*****g a******s. I'm done... SOOOOO f*****g done.
ron

10 Years Ago

I'm sorry Feix :(
Ok no one mess with Fenix!!!!!!!!!
Hawk Flight

10 Years Ago

You know damn well I wont let this go for good. you may have one this spat but I will will win the t.. read more
DO you realize just how much I HATE this poem -.-

NOTHING
IS
WRONG
GODDESS DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hawk Flight

10 Years Ago

YES
THERE
IS
GODDESS DAMN

( I can yell too you know)
Fenix Flight

10 Years Ago

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Hawk Flight
Hawk Flight

Kingdom of Amythest, MA



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I am a cold hearted a*****e. If you dont like it tough. 24 years old. Japanese. Been through enough s**t that it would make your head spin. I write crap poems but its my way of venting. My sister .. more..

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