Haiku Sunset

  

                                  

                               Ball of fire rests

                        On rippling waterbed

                              Preparing to sleep

Author's Note

Google image.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Your running 4-7-5. "Fire" is single syllable. How bout "a ball of fire rests". Very nice piece. I like it.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I wasn't sure at first about it, then checked. Fire is considered to be either one or two syllables, so can be used either way. Thank you for your review!

[Willard Wells]

Thanks. I find a few of these words and the pronunciation seems to vary by the part of the country you are from.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Agreed!

[Sharon Kim]

I love this! The picture is great, but maybe unnecessary, you've painted such a clear picture with your words!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, Sharon! I appreciate your visits and comments!

[C]

Such a very creative haiku! I love the description about sunset and this is really a pleasurable read :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you for your kind review!

[Adam Adams]

Sometimes, Reading "Haiku's" looked like breathing the scents of balmy air that comes with gentle peace. Very strong words you've used to this poem. Enjoyed reading it.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you for your lovely comments!

[sereenaoutloud]

Love this. Perfect description and makes me want to feel it! Nicely done!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

[Jeannine Winklaar]

Lovely theme for a Haiku. And the admosphere you create is wonderful with maching illustration.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you for your review!