Princess From the Throne

A Book by Hatter

The story of a princess exiled from her home, and her journey to return.

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© 2018 Hatter

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Ioanna Engarhos

Okay...wow! This was really good. I think you set up the story super well, and that the dialogue is clear and to the point! One thing maybe, is around the fifth or fourth paragraph, you stop the path of the dialogue between father and daughter for a bit of backstory. Obviously, backstory is good. But maybe (I think) it was just a little too much in one go? It really threw off the pace you made with the dialogue. But other than that, it was fantastic!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Lisa

I cant wait to see Gwen kick some butt. I'm also curious how Lexis will feel once she finds out that the king sent her sister away.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

I hope you keep reading

T.C Matthews

You've set the premise perfectly but I would've liked it if you didn't spoil what was going to happen. And yes, you should definitely continue the story. Can't wait for Gwendolyn to come out of the forest chewing cockroaches and wielding a broadsword. Just kidding but the story has potential. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Sorry, you did not like the spoiler, but thank you for the feedback.

augustus

Of course you must continue, I was fascinated by the theme and was waiting to see what she would do. Perhaps she could find her handsome Prince?

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Who knows?

Wanaka

Damn that escalated fast. When she comes back home with an army. "Take this Father!" lol. It was nice that it was a fast read, but I felt like some details needed to be put in. Like the fact that there weren't any servants you wrote about. It felt like it was just the main event and felt a little empty. Which if that's what you wanted the reader to feel since the princess is getting kicked out then great job. I can't wait to see what has happened to her old home.