Asylum

She Betrayed my compassion, my love, my everything she has destroyed all I have built. She Trapped me within myself, for her own greed..

You.. The thought of you used to caress me with such dignity, love I thought. All lies, I let you into my mind and all you did was destroy it all. The hatred in your heart, the betrayal in your veins. You couldn't forgive let alone forget, your incapable of being happy. For your heart is serpentine. Cold-blooded, and venomous I used to call you god's gift to me. then I realized that god couldn't make someone as vile as you. Your walls enclosed me, told me to change when really your the molding. I changed everything for you. deserted my friends, my family, my life. You used to say the world is cruel, and no one will love you like me. At the time happiness filled my heart, now I'm empty stone-like. No emotions to harm me, no attachments, no more pain. All this time I thought that I was trapped when, it was you who trapped me in a house of bones. I always said I will burn alive, beautiful suffering I was so indulged with your everything. You killed it all.. Everything.

Thank you..

For freeing me from my asylum.

-HateCraft.

Reviews

[Becky]

It's as if you just took the thoughts from your mind/heart and splashed them on the screen without diluting. The pain you must be feeling is a tragedy, but I suppose a happy life never makes for good writing. Whether it's worth it or not is up to each one of us.

I still have no idea with your writing. Is the font change intentional, to make the reader realize the depth of the words that follow, or is it merely a random occurrence that manages to somehow work better uncorrected? (I suppose you'll probably never tell me, but oh well:p)

[Rachelle]

There is hope beyond what you are feeling and undergoing now, HateCraft. Know that there is always a Dawn to what might seem an everlasting Night.

God bless!