Free My Tortured Soul.

For her.

I want to free my former self, for he is trapped within this wicked shell that I have become, this demon controls my life... Bound by chains and forsaken in the eyes of the divine. He is starving for truth, starving for solace, starving for freedom, for one more day in this self-inflicted torment will be the death of US. 

Me and you, the symbol of my heart, the object of my love. The pain I've caused is too much for only one to bear, but you stayed. You helped the war within the darkest recesses of my mind you've reached all the corners and granted them with light. You've given me reason to fight you gave it months ago, but I was to young to realize it, now your giving up, and I'm starting to wake up from my frozen coma. I should have awoken months ago, I should have let you in months ago, but I was to afraid to, fear has driven you distant, I'm going to make up for the mileage, it cannot end to day but I will take it one day at a time. 

For the demons in my head have left me within my own mind once again, I see things that were never there before I feel these feeling that I thought had left me eons ago. Love and Compassion I was never given that in this cold life, I used to give it to everyone, but it only took time before someone came along and broke my glass heart. So I shut everyone out. including my creator. But now it seems that the loving poet has been realeased one more, but I will forever be HateCraft and Hatecraft will always be me. but you put him at bay. you feed the wolf when I would let him feed on me, and slowly shred me apart. the hethens are no concern of mine, anymore I focus on the love of my paramore, my angel with burning wings.

I've settled the conflict within my head, the war on my body, the nightmare within my soul. My kind don't pray for ones like me.. You are my butterfly and I the Bat. Together we are one.

Free My Tortured Soul. 

Release my Heart, Kill the Fear. 

-HateCraft.

Reviews

[Becky]

Wow.

Uhh.

Yeah that's pretty much all I can say. The raw emotion that went into this piece is utterly overpowering.

The only criticism I have--in the third paragraph, line four, you use the wrong to (should be too) and the wrong your (should be you're). Not sure if that's supposed to be there. There are a few more scattered grammar errors, so I'd just run a spell check on it and proofread a bit.

But eeeee. I've re-read it twice, and there's something about the way you've phrased things that just makes me quite gleeful. Some pieces gently get the reader to empathize, but this reaches out and slaps you in the face. Very powerful write. Me like.

[HateCraft]

I have a hard time remembering where to put the correct Grammar, I just write it how i see it. in my head and how my heart reads it to me. Thank you for the review im glad you liked it..