Intricacies of the Utopian

Written about the blacks and whites, the yin and yangs of the modern world

In the heart of many

Lies a fear

Which words don't express

And actions don't justify

The sapien crumbles within himself

For if he says it out loud

Hell will be unleashed

And when he doesn't

The heavens banishes him

I've seen the destroyed

And the punisher too

And even though

They both must look up as per the salutations

This is not the case

Because the destroyed are gray

But the punisher too white

And even though I want to reconsider this

I end up with the same conclusion

The bad thing is

The punisher punishes using hope

And the destroyed think of it as a gift

I pity this world

For what it has become

I always try very hard

But there's too much to overcome

Author's Note

Please do not copy the work as I put a lot of effort into this

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

It's hard these days to watch the news...very hard.

[Fran Marie]

yes, it's a sad state of affairs the world
is in,society has fallen so far down
mankind is on a self destruction course
there's much racial divide and hatred
evil..deception. disrespect greed
and more's.the pity..it is indeed so
overwhelming ..i don't see much in the
way of improvement being done about
this doomed situation we have created

nice work

[dw817]

Welcome welcome to writer's Cafe. Thanks for the friend request.

Reading your poem. Well written. One thing we must never forget is that we value everything in this world based upon what we know or perceive to know. This limits us in many ways but makes our thoughts more tangible. More comprehensive.

Humans - will always have vices. These are irrevocable and irremovable - unfortunately. It is up to us to remove the old shackles that bind most of us today. To see beyond the light, to hear beyond the music, to feel beyond the flesh. It is these things and the belief of them that will bring us into our next stage of evolution.

Rating your poem: 100/100