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A Poem by MakinItRainRed
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There is a minor curse word in the last line...forgive me for that. ;)

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I want to forget you,
But I am unable.
You're in my head
Making me mentally unstable.

Why did you get in my mind,
When it was my love you weren't trying to find?
You love someone else,
Yet you are playing with my heart,
Messing with the pulse.

You influenced me greatly,
By making me a better person,
And I'm thankful for that.
But you turned out much different,
And it was my face on which you spat.

I can feel our bond breaking,
I can see you pulling away.
I don't want to let go of you,
Because it doesn't have to be this way.

I love you so much
That it's making me insane.
You put this spell on me,
And I doubt if I'll ever be the same.

No one can ever love you like I do,
Because I gave up everything in my life,
Trying to make you happy...
Trying to make you my wife.

You taught me a lesson,
And you taught it well.
My friends must know this,
And I will tell:
Don't trust a girl,
Or they'll cast that spell.
And in the end,
They'll say:
"You were just time pass."
Leaving you there,
Feeling like a stupid a*s.

© 2008 MakinItRainRed


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I do forgive you for the a*s part!!! LOL
You have to get out those feelings, it is cathartic for you and don't stop writing. It helps.
I wrote quite a few with pain in my heart. Good job, i can feel you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on October 21, 2008