Together

Together

A Poem by Hasan669
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This is an emotional, romantic and somewhat defiant poem about how strongly one feels about the one he loves.

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Why is the night so serene?

Why do the stars shine bright?

They know you are my queen

My one, true hearts delight

 

Why is the sun so radiant?

Why is the sky so blue?

They know the truth, not ambivalent

Our love for each other is true

 

Why do the bands play in time?

Why do their singers sing sweet?

They know it is never a crime

For us both to meet

 

Why do rivers flow so gentle?

Why do the mountains stay so high?

They know our love, of strong mettle

They know our love is no lie

 

Why is the shore so calm?

Why do the boats stay at anchor?

They know how gentle your arm

That soothes my worried temper

 

The forests seem to be abundant

The trees seem to be evergreen

They know our love so radiant

The best that has ever been

 

I know why gardens are in bloom

I know why roses have scents of honey

For us there is gaiety in every room

Throughout life, together we will journey

 

I know that when you are near

My heart and soul have no fear

The world may end without pity

Our love will last an eternity

 

 

 

 

 

© 2018 Hasan669


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dear Hassan... there is a Song with words, “Gibraltar May crumble... but our love is here to stay”... Also, I think of the words of a song, @And when I grow too old to dream... I’ll have you to remember”. Hassan, your poetry is lovely as thunder snow when love is drifting along the River of your heart. truly, Pat

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

Correction: the song... “The Rockies may crumble... Gibraltar may tumble.. they are only made of .. read more
Hasan669

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Patricia. So glad you like this poem. Actually I wrote the poem for someone I fell in l.. read more



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Beautiful and hopeful words shared.
"I know that when you are near
My heart and soul have no fear
The world may end without pity
Our love will last an eternity"
The above lines. Hope and wishes for the all of us. Thank you Hasan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hasan669

5 Years Ago

Thank you. A video recording of this poem is on my channel YouTube. Please feel welcome to see it.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Hasan. I enjoyed your work.
Amazing. Your words flowed effortlessly. I love the rhyme and the peaceful atmosphere you have created. It was so soothing to read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dear Hassan... there is a Song with words, “Gibraltar May crumble... but our love is here to stay”... Also, I think of the words of a song, @And when I grow too old to dream... I’ll have you to remember”. Hassan, your poetry is lovely as thunder snow when love is drifting along the River of your heart. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

Correction: the song... “The Rockies may crumble... Gibraltar may tumble.. they are only made of .. read more
Hasan669

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Patricia. So glad you like this poem. Actually I wrote the poem for someone I fell in l.. read more

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Added on November 24, 2018
Last Updated on November 24, 2018
Tags: Romance, Love, Night, Sun, Rivers, Shore, Forests

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Hasan669
Hasan669

Reading, Berkshire, United Kingdom



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