Your Smile

I wrote this when I remember the last person that I fell because of her smile and broke me everyday I see her smiling/laughing. Hope you enjoy this short poem. :)

When I first saw you smiling,
You made me staring.
I thought I'm falling
And it's right, what I'm thinking.
I was very happy that morning.

And now, I see you again smiling
But now I'm breaking.
And now I'm dying,
Cause I can see you with someone, laughing.
I can see you are happy, so I'll start disappearing.

Author's Note

It's my first writing in this site so I don't know quite everything about here so please do bare with me.

Reviews

[L. Michelle Corp]

Sad but true. If you have the capacity to love, you will be heartbroken at some point. Love yourself most.

[Mariaspain]

I like this, sad but relatable

[Random]

i wrote it from the bottom of my heart from the very past heart break. maybe that's why it is relatable for anyone.