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So Dont cry now,

we'll work it out.

The rain wont stop,

but the lightning will.

Its the end of the road right here,

the red sign makes it clear,

So let me tuck you in,

We'll just let our thoughts spin,

I'll lay with you right here,

until the beginning comes near.

 

So I'll hold you tight,  well talk late into the night.

Then I'll take your hand, and we'll run on the sand.

Let the waves roll,  were just losing control!

We've kept our hearts close, theres no way we let it go!

 

Get your smile on,

the bad is almost gone,

the sun came out to play,

its a beautiful day.

Its the rising of a new sun,

We put ourselves together as one.

Were good here for now,

You can now take your bow,

Im so proud of you,

you finally made it through.

 

 

So I'll hold you tight,  well talk late into the night.

Then I'll take your hand, and we'll run on the sand.

Let the waves roll,  were just losing control!

We've kept our hearts close, theres no way we let it go!

Author's Note

Future song?

Reviews

[hiralarious]

I thought it was a beautiful and totally amazing poem.. song, I don't know about it. I generally listen to songs that are in languages that I don't understand(it's funkeh, I hear people sing, but don't end up singing my lungs out... usually) but I'm guessing it could be a great song if there was a great singer involved.. however, I think songs are supposed to be a little longer.. not much, but yeah.
Some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing that bad.

Anyway, brilliant poem/song!(: