Forgetting myself

Realizing what went wrong. For the pace that I have sent to you. The letters that I have stacked with dust. Forgetting the moment that I hanged on. Forgetting when I let my heart win. Timeless things still hang over me. In the wake of light I try and look away. Feelings have slowly crept out of me am a shell of what I was a ghost of you and me. Pressuring my self after that the blast looking for sings of life I find people and question helping them. I am ugly I do not feel I see the world pass by me as if I am caught in a picture timeless to the world. The world dose not under stand. Looking in to glass I try and see myself as if I have no refection. Lead the lamb to slather and watch as there lives are ripped and under stand this is what the world is, what the world has to be. Its just a matter of time before we are all found out.

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

I really like...looking in the glass to see myself as if I have no reflection thank you for sharing this

[Quattro Hall]

your welcome and thank you.

[catofjade]

Just as the scaly, dried skin shed by the snake echoes of an entire snake lifetime of prey hunted, threats averted, cuts and tears from the sharp edges of rocks, and other marks of its journey, so does this piece reverberate with the hollow longings of yesterday painted by the restless emotions of now. It is a shell of a part of life that once was, nothing more...and nothing less, translucent yet real, and dead but still echoing from the marks of your soul's journey through it, and whether it stores but an hour or half a lifetime's images of pain, loss, and survival, still it bent and pressed you inside and out until you could take control of it and not allow it to anymore. That's what you've done by writing this. Intense.

[Quattro Hall]

Thanks catofjade, I cant wait for warmer weather so i can write more. I only seem to write well and a lot when I'm out side. this one is over a year old still doping a few older ones from my files. Im being very picky on which ones I do lol.

[catofjade]

yaya me too. But I would like to see moremoremore from you!!