Her Dream

Two souls flying apart,

 hurt by

 scars, 

permanently

 etched in 

once beating

 hearts. 

 

Both imagined

 paradise, 

Rose bushes blooming

 before their eyes. 

 

Sadly knowing,

 their love

 died now , 

suffered spilt blood, 

And

 dried out .. 

 

Happy dreams

  Intoxicated

 her reality. 

Falling for her illusions. 

She could possibly 

Be happy

Reviews

[Kianzeht]

Very nice.enjoyed it I think everything is balanced.

[Chris Shaw]

When it:s over, it's over. No amount of dreaming otherwise, will change the reality of the situation. Some relationships won't last even though they start so full of promise. Sad situation. Thanks for sharing Harmony Txx.

Chris

[Harmony.Txx]

Yes, you are right Chris. Too many times I believe we all have learned, the hard way. I believe more than what I see, at times. I have painfully learned lessons this way, more times than not...
As always Chris, Thank you very much for your time and review!

[Chris Shaw]

You are very welcome :)

[Robert Haigh]

A sad poem, but when love goes wrong and falls apart, sadness is part of the price we pay.

[Harmony.Txx]

Robert,
Love can be beautiful and it can be ugly.
We should never take more of the ugly than good.
Thank you very much for your time and review!
-Brianna