Influenced

Now you want to come back

 to be a real man, 

you can’t. 

Your mind will not allow you to, 

Not after what has happened. 

You feel like a b***h now. 

How could you submit yourself to her? 

A queen? 

Who opened herself to another clown? 

After you pushed and pushed 

until her world turned upside down? 

You didn’t really want her to go… 

but she didn’t know. 

So she broke your heart and 

you’re outraged. 

You want her back now 

Everything feels a little too late. 

You question, “is it possible to 

go back and win the fight?” 

But she would leave anyone 

for you

a million times! 

You both have the worst traits: 

pride and jealousy. 

She will still love 

you unconditionally.

She will give you everything 

 She believes you are made for her,

It’s a never ending cycle for 

what hurts  

she will always look back. 

She lost. 

After all, what else could 

she possibly deserve?

-Brianna Rodriguez

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! A struggle of love me, love me not. A tug of war and recrimination. Powerful stuff. A ship that is sinking needing to save.

[Harmony.Txx]

Thank you Sami..Some of us just cannot be saved.. However we still love, with all of our hearts. My experience? Love is war.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love it. Best regards. You are welcome.