Bond of Friendship

Side by Side or Miles Apart...True Friends are always close to the Heart!!

When tears fell from my eyes,
You knew they were real and not crocodile's.
It was so easy for you to make me smile,
It just took you a short while.
Wish I could take away your pain,
Bring back your happiness and let your sorrows drain.
Unfortunately my efforts went in vain,
Your tears kept pouring like the rain.
Someday somewhere you will find a door,
Which will be the gateway to happiness I assure.
I will forever stand by your side,
Just a call and I will be sitting beside.
True friends we are, true friends we will be,
Together we will uproot the sorrowful tree.
The bond we share is quite strong,
It will remain the same even if the distance is long.
Found a special friend in you,
Hope you know all I say is not fake but true.
Your happiness is all I pray for,
Surround yourself by peace and not war.
Always let your emotions flow,
Throw them all off with a blow.
Remember hope is a waking dream,
Get up smiling and dont scream.
I'll miss you my friend,
I wish this friendship has no end!

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

I just dislike rhyming poems! I don't mean this one particularly, but in general they disturb me.
I love the message you're writing your friend over here.....
I am a strong believer in friendships and sincerity :)
Very faithful adaptation of the concept :) and good writing skills :)
goodbye :)

[Anahat]

Well everybody has a different choice...Me for eg feel my poems are just incomplete without the rhyme...I personally cant feel that connected to the poems which do not rhyme..and ou on the other hand are completely opposite!
Anyway thank you for the appreciation and thank you for taking out time to review even though you don't like rhyming poems! :) So that means a lot to me

[Daydreamer]

Hahaha true!! My poems never rhyme.... I love free verse more ♥
you're welcome, Anahat :)

[Jennie Baron]

To each his own, for sure...I like both. I think the criticism of rhyming poems comes from the fact that the words can feel forced simply for the sake of rhyming. I like both and I admire poets who do rhyming poetry very well (because I don't). A poet can learn much from reading the classical poets who were so masterful at it. As for this write, I think it represents the beauty of friendship very well.

[Anahat]

Yes rightly said..Thank you so much :)

[Namrata]

True friends we are, true friends we will be,
Together we will uproot the sorrowful tree.

Ironically so beautiful.

[Anahat]

thank you so much :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

The hidden message in this piece is very beautiful, I loved reading it. This person is very lucky to have a friend like you by their side. :-) Your a very unique writer, nicely penned. :-)

Kaze~

[Anahat]

thank you so much for a wonderful review..:)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Justin]

that was pretty :) it is one of my favorite of your poems!!! friendship can be defined in some many ways, a great friend is extremely hard to come by cherish them while they are there, but once they are gone it is even harder to live without them

[Anahat]

yes very rightly said Justin...we should never let go of true friends..
Thank you...means a lot :)

[Justin]

your welcome, people come and go but the real friends are with you forever!!!!

[Anahat]

yep exactly :)

[Dayran]

I'm sure he wishes the same for you ... princess. Nice ...

[Anahat]

well yea hopefully..Thank you :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

A true friend is hard to find,
Friendship is a bond that binds,
the two in relation so pure,
that it's depth can't be determined..

A good and worthy write :)

[Anahat]

thank you and yes truly said :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

So much beautiful poem you wrote, hats off to you!

[Anahat]

thank you so much :)

[Anahat]

Written for a dear friend of mine just as token of remembrance of our friendship!