Bond of Friendship

Side by Side or Miles Apart...True Friends are always close to the Heart!!

When tears fell from my eyes,
You knew they were real and not crocodile's.
It was so easy for you to make me smile,
It just took you a short while.
Wish I could take away your pain,
Bring back your happiness and let your sorrows drain.
Unfortunately my efforts went in vain,
Your tears kept pouring like the rain.
Someday somewhere you will find a door,
Which will be the gateway to happiness I assure.
I will forever stand by your side,
Just a call and I will be sitting beside.
True friends we are, true friends we will be,
Together we will uproot the sorrowful tree.
The bond we share is quite strong,
It will remain the same even if the distance is long.
Found a special friend in you,
Hope you know all I say is not fake but true.
Your happiness is all I pray for,
Surround yourself by peace and not war.
Always let your emotions flow,
Throw them all off with a blow.
Remember hope is a waking dream,
Get up smiling and dont scream.
I'll miss you my friend,
I wish this friendship has no end!

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

I just dislike rhyming poems! I don't mean this one particularly, but in general they disturb me.
I love the message you're writing your friend over here.....
I am a strong believer in friendships and sincerity :)
Very faithful adaptation of the concept :) and good writing skills :)
goodbye :)

[Anahat]

Well everybody has a different choice...Me for eg feel my poems are just incomplete without the rhyme...I personally cant feel that connected to the poems which do not rhyme..and ou on the other hand are completely opposite!
Anyway thank you for the appreciation and thank you for taking out time to review even though you don't like rhyming poems! :) So that means a lot to me

[Daydreamer]

Hahaha true!! My poems never rhyme.... I love free verse more ♥
you're welcome, Anahat :)

[Jennie Baron]

To each his own, for sure...I like both. I think the criticism of rhyming poems comes from the fact that the words can feel forced simply for the sake of rhyming. I like both and I admire poets who do rhyming poetry very well (because I don't). A poet can learn much from reading the classical poets who were so masterful at it. As for this write, I think it represents the beauty of friendship very well.

[Anahat]

Yes rightly said..Thank you so much :)

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
I see that you have made a friend request for me but I am wondering why as I do not see that you have read and reviewed any of my work?
Lisa, now in Spain

[Anahat]

Hi, Lisa,
I recently joined back here. I will surely read and review your work soon. Didn't want to lose your profile later so, I sent a friend request. :)

[Lisasview]

Okay great

[Angana Choudhury]

nice...rhyming.....simple......beautiful vision on friendship.. keep writing :)

[Anahat]

Thank you :)

[Shubham Joshi]

This is an extremely brilliant poem and me I just love rhymes and this is a beautiful example of that for this is an excellent poem dedicated to a friend who are just so integral part of our life that us and our friends... just the same.

[Anahat]

Thank you so much! So glad that you loved it :)

[Mirra]

Love the rhyming, it gives artistic beauty and that's one factor that makes poetry unique from other genres. Great poem!

[Anahat]

Thank you :)

[Happy hours]

I'm going to call them right now after reading this....great work :)

[Anahat]

hehe..thats nice..Communication is necessary! Thank you :)

[Happy hours]

yes it is necessary...I agree...

[B.J]

This is a beautiful write. Genuine feelings for life and friendship.

[Anahat]

Glad you liked it...Thank you :)

[B.J]

Most welcome

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I love this piece so much. Its funny cause as I read it I could picture saying these things to my bestfriend and her saying it to me. You have truly captured the essence of the Bond of Friendship. Amazing work!

[Anahat]

Thank you Natalie for your kind words...Means a lot :)

[TheKratiMittal]

Rhymes perfectly!
Nice and sweet.

[Anahat]

Thank you :)

[TheKratiMittal]

Welcome:)
Stop by and read some of my work,too!
Thanks.

[Anahat]

Sure, I will :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

A very heartfelt poem, Anahat. I, too, could do with fewer rhymes, but the general flow of your poem is very good. Write on!

[Anahat]

Thank you sweetheart :)

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautifully powerful vision of friendship... of the longing to keep it strong always... to stand together through everything... though time and distance always try to tear friends away from us... So good!

[Anahat]

Thank you Craig for a wonderful review :) Glad you liked it :)