Unknown Spirits

Unknown Spirits

A Story by Fantasia Allmighty
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Reid, 23, and Kalli, 20, can see ghost and are trying to help a very familar spirit.

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      "Do you hear them?" Reid asked. "Do you feel their presents?"

       Reid was one of the only few people who could see the earth bound spirits. He tried to convince the spirits to leave and sometimes this didn't work. That's why he depended on me, Kalli, to do the rest. I can see them to. Reid is my brother. I have to convince them to leave when he can not.

         "Yes, Reid, I can. I see her. She is standing right there." I told him pointingto the rock.

         "Why is she in the woods?" Reid asked "Do you believe she was murdered here, Kalli?" He asked me not taking his eyes off of the spot where the girl stood.

The girl was in a white torn dress. A wedding gown to be more specific.

She had her hair let down and it was wet and wavey. It stuck to her face. Her dress was bloody at the bottom.

       "Excuse me." I said to the girl walking toward her.

       "I'm going to be late I have to go, right now." She said rushing away farther into the thick wood.

       "Late for what?" Reid called after her.

    "Her wedding, duh." I laughed "Did the dress not give you a hint?"

I ran after her and Reid ran after me. The girl stopped and turned and looked at me in the eyes. "Why are you following me?"

I didn't know what to tell her. I couldn't just tell her she was dead. Apperantly,she was murdered before her wedding. In a suicide case she would know she was dead. How do I tell her? I felt Reid come up behind me. I turned to him.

     "What do I tell her?"

     "Nothing yet, ask her her name." He whispered where she couldn't him.

I turned away from him and to the girl.

       "Ma'am, whats your name?" I asked her softly.

She appeared at my face.

       "Are you Stephanie?!" She yelled at me.

I stepped back in shock. I shook my head and looked at her in the eyes.

     "No, who's stephanie? And who are you, sweetie?" I asked her.

I turned and looked at Reid. He walked up to me and whispered in my ear. "Your only twenty don't call her sweetie you sound old."

He was trying to make me more relaxed, but it wasn't helping. This spirit scared me.

     "I am-" She cut off and disappeared into a fog.

I was pushed back into Reid who caught me.

     "Reid! Another spirit grabbed her I saw it! It grabbed her by the neck!" I yelled at him.

He looked shocked. He turned me so that I would be looking him in the eyes.

     "Calm down!" He yelled "Are you sure?"

     "Yes, all I seen was it's hands, but it was there!"

I stared at the place where the girl was pulled into the fog. I pictured her face and now she looked very familar. I noiticed very little that wasn't familar. I tried to think, but I couldn't imagin what whoever that was might be doing to that poor soul.  Reid brought me back to reality.

            "What do you want me to do?" He asked quickly. "Find her, or go home and wait for tomorrow?"

I didn't know.

           "I don't know, she seemed so scared." I tried to sound strong, but my voice was shaky.

            "I think maybe, I might know where she is. She won't be there, but she might be there for a little while." He sprang up to his feet and was gone.

 

 

 

            "where are we? Why will she be here for?" I asked looking around.

               "Hush." He said in a hushed voice moving toward a white building.

I realized then that it was a church. I now knew why she could be here, but I didn't want to know what grabbed her and would bring her here.

               "Hello." Reid yelled.

               "I thought you said to hush?!" I whispered harshly.

He looked at me.

         "I told you to hush, I said nothing about me."

I smerked at him and walked on until we heard slight mummers around the corner of the old church.

       "Do you hear that?" Reid asked.

       "Yes, come on. She has seen you, so you have to go check it out."

      "Your just scared." I mocked.

     "Yes, that has alot to do with it." He smiled. "Now, go!"

I went with shaky hands and saw the poor innocent girl sitting in the pew of the old worn out church she had her hands covering her face sobbing. This must had been where she was going to have her wedding.

      "Hello?" I called out, suprised my voice didn't crack.

     "What?" She spun around to face me.

 All I could do was stare at this poor girl in the tattered dress with her hair in a mess. I couldn't imagine what she must be feeling.

    "What's your name? I'm Kallie, I'm your friend." I tried to calm her. "I'm not going to hurt you in anyway."

I saw a slight smile play at her lips, but it quickly faded away.

     "Oh, I'm Marie Hernadaze. Do you have any idea what happened to this church?" She asked looking around at the ruins.

I took a step closer to her and she didn't seem to care. I seen a glimpse of Reid sticking his head around the corner of the church. I waved him to go back.

      "Well, Marie, whats the last thing you remember?" I asked her sitting down in the pew behind her.

She placed a finger to her lips. "Mmmmm...." She hummed. "Not much, driving to the church. I remember seeing my sister waving at me as I pulled up around the corner. Then her face went white and I fell to the ground and I don't remember anything after falling. Then I just now woke up and realized that I was going to miss my wedding if I didn't get a move on."

    "That's all?"

   "Yes, now what happened to this church?"

   "It burned last summer. No one was inside, except. . ." It hit me!

        

 

 

 

© 2011 Fantasia Allmighty


Author's Note

Fantasia Allmighty
This is only a chapter of this story, but please if you read it give me a comment. This is not the complete chapter, but it's really late and I'm so tired. This is all I go to so far, but be sure to leave me a comment. Please! DON'T COMMENT ON GRAMMAR

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Grammer honey, grammer. You now I luvs your work. Especially my slightly werewolfic family.

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I definitely think it has a lot of potential. Other than a few minor grammar issues that made parts of it confusing I enjoyed it.

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well the story sounds like it's going to be a good one.

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