Darkness

I can't see!

It's Dark to dark!

Can anyone find me?

I've been in the dark since I met you.

You hurt me.

You made me bleed.

You made me hurt.

I can't fix this.

Please I beg you help me and try to forgive.

I will get through this. . . I hope.

I don't understand can you help?

 

Author's Note

This is one of my first poems tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Solitary Dreamer]

Good poem. You are an awesome poet:)

[paul]

i like the poem. i like the raw emotion. it conveys very well difficult emotions

[Aggie Skeleton]

I'll find you! It was cute.