Objective Anonimity

 

I think I'm a figment of your imagination...

I just don't know whose

I lost my identity long ago

My life story used to have just one writer

then others were invited in

my story lost all timeline

I am as alive as the sun

yet as dead as your mind

as real as your imagination

yet as unreal as the internet

I am always changing

Do you know who I am?

As my friend will you help me find my identity?

"I leave no distinguishing marks"

and most will never know that I was here.

"My guitar strings have long since been broken

but my soul no longer weeps..."

I have no idea what that means

will you please tell me?

Tell me your darkest secrets

I won't reveal them to a soul

I promise

I share everything I am with everyone

yet I tell no one anything

for I do not know myself

If you are my soul-mate

please tell me

for my soul wonders eternally

looking for someone to second it

I am only a few years old

yet I have existed eternally

in the minds of all

And I am in your mind as well

speaking in the back of your head

above your ego and superego

and even above the id

telling you that that these words are true

and are spoken with the greatest passion.

And in this, I feel I am quite alone.............

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

"My guitar strings have long since been broken

but my soul no longer weeps..."

I have no idea what that means

will you please tell me?"
these lines were intense to me. I play the bass guitar and for me , at one time, it was in essense my psychology, i played along for hours trying to relinquish my inner pain.
i felt as though they meant that you haven't been able to weep your pain into your music, as your guitar has been out of commision, yet you haven't the energy or the motivation to try to express your thoughts as it could be too painful.
beautiful
nice work
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