Fear Fall

Don't fear the blood or the smoke.

They are merely the result of mistrust.

The real fear lies in being consumed.

Once devoured, a quicksand hand couldn't

pull you out.

Light lies when it hides in the daylight

Because only in tangible misery is it limited

to cutting through the dark.

What will it take to open your eyes?

No of course not you, everyone's eyes read perfection

in the mirrors.

But one day mirrors won't exist, only expectations.

Will you have met them? Or will you enjoy failing into furnace?

To maintain is hard but to let go is harder.

Look into yourself, don't scream for anything unless it matters.

Honesty cannot be overlooked, it will not be overlooked.

So do not fear the blood or the smoke.

Author's Note

This is meant to be a song, screamed.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful dark imagery and speaks of fear and pain... Could sense the stunning sound!

[Octob3r Star]

Nice, Thanks For Sharing

[kei]

amazing.

[Angel Veselinov]

Nice for a song :) very good write really dark and horrid GREAT ! :)

[alesuriko]

Really interesting. I don't like screaming music... it irritates me but this is something that would sound very interesting because I actually like the lyrics of this one. The imagery is wonderful. I especially loved "failing into the furnace?" Very well done.

[Michael X]

wow, it feels like a heavey metal song as well, dark, dripping with a sense of morbidity and power, great job, i really liked it