Let's go back.

Let's go back.

A Poem by HappyTaylor
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This is just to get some things off my chest. I like it I guess.

"

Lets go go go back.
Let's start back over.
Let's see the stars in our eyes,
and the love in our hearts

Let's go go go back.
Let's find what we've been missing.
Let's take back everything we've lost,
everything we've had before.
Let's go go go back.
Let's never fight again.
Let's remember what we found,
remember what we had.
Let's go go go back.
Back to the begining.
Back to when all we had was love,
and then some more.
Let's go go go back,
please.
Let's just go back.......





© 2010 HappyTaylor


Author's Note

HappyTaylor
Sorry if you don't like it, tell me what you think anyways?!
I stopped adding pictures, because I had WAY to many, and a few are from the same day, a party in case you were wondering.

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I like it...but honestly...I think you can do without the extra "go's" and remove the word "back" from the second line....I read it aloud to myself like that and it flowed so much better....try it and see what you think. It's a really beautiful piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Awe, this was a really cute poem. I liked it though. I think that love should always be about forgiveness. If you truly love someone they shouldn't make you feel all different about yourself. He seems to be the one that captured your heart. That is the beautiful thing about this poem. It's like if he was hurt then you would be hurt too and I can see that within the poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it...but honestly...I think you can do without the extra "go's" and remove the word "back" from the second line....I read it aloud to myself like that and it flowed so much better....try it and see what you think. It's a really beautiful piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First picture is adorable...but anyway. The poem is lovely..very heartfelt, and well written. I liked it a lot...to the favorites it goes.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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