Mr. Oh Mr.

A prostitutes song if you will.I thought about it sitting in class one last week.A twisted love story.

Pretty eyes lure him in, entrancing his mind with thoughts of their sin
Follow me she says. Mr. what is your name?
I am the one you desire. Mr. you put your women to shame
Mr. Passion is built and you say you want the Eiffel Tower
Give me your day and I’ll turn it into ours
The sweet smell of love intoxicating aroma
Mr. Love is an effort I wish not to put forward
Energy is all .I don‘t want better or worse
Make you fall for me, the making of a tragedy
Mr. I can’t tell you how long this game will last
Won’t ask you to trust me because trust runs fast
But I’m asking you Mr. what your name is?
When your heart finally shatters I will not take the blame

Author's Note

A prostitutes song if you will.I thought about it sitting in class one last week.A twisted love story.

Reviews

[Miss Kitty]

I quite enjoyed this poem as it sparked my interest instantly.
I like the implications of romance, yet of sexual imagery, that have been achieved through use of the Eiffel tower!
IS it about prostitution though? I read it as a first person narrative, or as though written in the voice of a female forewarning the guy as, maybe, she believes that she will destroy him?
Perhaps that's my own twisted take on it though :D
Like the tone! xx

[LittleMadGirl]

I like it.
But when I read it, I wasn't really thinking of a prostitude... It seemed to me, that Love itself was speaking.

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this is amazing, like this

[Kyle]

This is a great poem. I had to re-read it a few times but I did end up liking it in the end. Guess I'm not the only one who thinks of twisted things to write in class. Thanks for sharing the poem, and keep up the writing.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an interesting poem. I could picture the Eiffel Tower. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Lia]

Great poem!

[The Morbid The Merrier]

Ah~! It's amazing! The poem was sensational!

[Cheyenne]

I like this... its sort of every prostitutes motto.... not that i would know lol but it sounds like it! They would never take the blame for ruining someones marriage or anything ike that

[Adelia Alighieri]

Very intriguing and unique. Well done.

[Nina Kari]

very interesting, i like the last two lines. it makes you think a little, but thats just me. wonderful write