The Uknown

Oh the love poems I waste my time writing haha.I was on one of my emotional splurges and poured everything out.

I told you I was afraid of the unknown
The unknown meaning me and you
Heartbreak me and you
          I mean me and him
I'm afraid that his name will spill out of my mouth
            Taint my lips,pollute your mind with my unspoken thoughts
                  I still love him  
                         Although he has denied me my strongest desire
I'm afraid of you leaving when you find out I'm not on the mend ,
            that I don't care,that my feelings are gone,
            that he's far from my mind (but that's pretend)
I want to say I love you
Not to keep you ,but to reassure you that he won't replace you nor erase you
                         So I Love You

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

I loved this poem. The format, the meaning, and how it was written in general. I like the line about tainting the lips and polluting the mind with unspoken thought. Loved it

[Paradoxical]

so emotional, and so thoughtful! I know exactly what you're talking about too, great job

[Love Is Dead]

oh. love. So much negativity and love.You can't keep love a secrete hun! nice write.
it flows well.To me this can be spoken in a gentle yet calm voice speaking of what has happened to you or anyone else.Nice write!

[An owl on the moon]

You convey such a wondrous depth of emotion.. the anxiety of letting go.. still loving.. There is a feel of personal history woven into the fabric of memories and the moment. Beautiful.

[marcie]

Love comes in many forms ..... We dont choose love , love chooses us and each journey we take on loves highway is a journey into the unknown. Well written and good expression.

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{Nice---this a wonerful poem---I Love It...
you can feel love's/relationship's tense mood...
i have felt this way before...magnificent poetry!!!}

james:-)

[Stella]

I have to say i really like this one.