Evening Treat

Stalker's POV

The window of truth creating opportunity
One glance this way, baby you'll ruin me
I only want to watch promise not touch
Hidden within your bushes not asking for much
Just a peak of you in the comfort of your home
Jokes on you, you think you're all alone
 It's cute I think when you dance around the kitchen
Shorts and tank top simple, but sexy
No kids.No man. If I'm wrong correct me
Setting the table for whom?
Two?
Imaginary friend? If not then who
You disappear to change and come back amazing
Is it hot or is it just me? My temperature's blazing
Red lips, eyes shadow, blush, eyeliner
All this for whom? Who's the lucky diner?
Hair swept up exposing your neck
Rustling in the leaves my pants a wreck
Headlights shine erasing the night
Confident that I'm completely out of sight
You open the door embrace him with a smile
Taking his coat *chuckle* he's staying a while

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you describe the activities in the poem. To be a stalker can bring you into the story. I like the detail description of preparing the table and the person getting prepared for the evening. A nice close to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[KillerWithWords]

Fantastic job.
I think the character you've described in this poem is very real and that your description is very accurate.
Well done.
Oh, clever rhymes too. . .

[Sami Khalil]

Confident that I'm completely out of sight
You open the door embrace him with a smile .
A nice write.

[Lexi Villanueva]

Not bad i like how the expresses are expressed and how the stalker is watching theirs a lot of emontion i expect and see