Life

                                                      

 Scars and Cuts 

            May break your heart 

        But sun and fun breaks mine 

    

      Life is like a game 

     Choose the wrong piece you die 

       Choose the right one you win 

    But there's always a consequence

       In life 

Reviews

[Ezel_Amaru]

To the point . Directed with few words. I relate this piece to a chess game , moves before checkmate. Consequences are owned by the living. So fourth we should live them , but decisions are personal therefore require more thinking. You live or you die , these are the choices we have the luxury to decide. I enjoyed your piece. Thank you.

[Savannah Gossett]

Thank you Ezel. I wrote this poem because I also relate to it. It explains why life can be hard and easy in some sort of degree. Thank you for liking my poem.

[Ezel_Amaru]

In my opinion relating to what you write from a personal level is thebest form of you writing.. be well.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I agree there are consequences for most of are actions and choices as well. But some may reveal certain rewards but we won't know until we take them. Good poem thank you for sharing your work.

[Savannah Gossett]

Thank you Carlos I agree with your statement and thank you for liking my poem.