Haiku #4

Haiku #4

A Poem by Jared Michael Smith

the little girl sits
in the very last bus seat
looking back to home

© 2013 Jared Michael Smith


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Jared Michael Smith
Any ideas for improvements?

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This is beautiful. I wonder what the little girl thinks about. And, I cannot answer your question for improvements. Sorry. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

In my mind, she was riding the school bus for the first time, so to me she thinks about going back h.. read more
EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Aha. So, that was it. :)
Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Yep, that was it. :)
I think it is wonderful just as it is. For me it is a poem that triggers both a visual and an emotional response. Beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on December 13, 2013
Last Updated on December 13, 2013
Tags: girl, Child, school, bus, home

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Jared Michael Smith
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I'm a pretty mild-mannered guy who enjoys composing poetry, playing video games, and drawing portraits. I don't think my writing's that good, but some of the people I have had read tell me otherwise... more..

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