Person I fear

Person I fear

A Poem by Boldpen
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Greatest fear of most of the people... well.. at least for me.

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There is one person I fear to meet
I wish that person was never there
although he is dearly sweet
for me that angel deeply care

I hate that look in those eyes
inspecting me from head to toe
clearly looking through my lies
cleverly watching my every woe

That expression makes me scream
saying "There, You can do better"
He knows about my every dream
He knows my life from letter to letter

Worst of all, that silent grin
telling me "I Told you so,
before you committed any sin
I had gave out a Giant loud NO.

I know that human helps me out
yet being with him gives me scare
perhaps because he has no doubt
because of all the truth he bare

No good, No bad, I can hide
Whenever together we are to be
He makes me watch my every side
No way to fight, No way to flee

No way to run, So now I dare
Since, we can never depart
In my memories, he has a share
So now, I just stiff my heart

Willing to win over my fright
Mustering courage, at a slow pace
I finally do a thing that’s right
In the mirror, myself I face.

© 2012 Boldpen


Author's Note

Boldpen
Now.. I have no idea why I wrote it.... But It's maybe the weirdest piece ever written by me... But I had fun so I Guess it's worth posting....
Do tell me my grammar mistakes.

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Very intriguing I like it alot.
Very poetic as well. Enjoyed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was really intriguing.
I like this very much, i loved the ending!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very interesting.
I really liked this, It has a nice flow
I love the ending, its a nice twist
I can relate to this.
Great Write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow such a strong, deep rooted write. I really enjoyed this write, Love the rhyme scheme. Awesome write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice poem, I did not expect the ending, I thought the person was Dad, or ... some boy or something. There is a nice flow to your words here which made reading quite pleasurable especially with the rhymes. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ajmer, Rajasthan, India



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