Good and Bad are two things always present in everyone..... it's just... what we choose to be.
There is a beauty deep inside me generous, pure, hearty, kind calm and loving, to God she is serving A clay heart with stout mind
Then is this beast on hate who feast violent, selfish, full of tears Blazing in rage, locked in pain's cage whose words pierce like spears
And between these two lay I , without a clue gazing at my deed's lamp lit Only nice am I will be a true lie fault hide in me too, I admit.
It's obvious, isn't it? This natural split Every single coin holds two faces but difference comes there when we decide where our soul will mark its traces.
For I am the beauty and I am the beast but in end, what I choose to see For I am the good and I am the bad Yet, I am what I choose to be.
Just a random write....
I just discovered, every person is good and bad.... but what we are, is marked by what we choose to be.....
there are always choices.
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You are not the "normal 15 year old," you are far beyond. At your age , this is a great observation. We do all have two sides. I find my darker, more sinister me comes out when I'm alone. I don't like that side of me. To counter it I try keeping myself busy. The rhyming pattern is so well developed and smooth.
Thanks.
An old American Indian proverb tells of two wolves dwelling in each of us that fight to live. One wolf is a ravenous beast and the other a nurturing guide. The one that lives is the one we feed.
Loved your poem describing the dilemma of knowing the truth and wondering how it will eventually express itself through you.
As it was said you are not just a normal 15 years old. People at your age write...differently. This sounds more mature, more serious. To be honest when I saw the title my reaction was "Again?" since those two words in this combination are over-abused. But once I started reading I was surprised. It wasn't what I expected and I was certainly pleased with that. Your structure is also good, nice tempo, easy to read. Good job!
Your writing is really good. I love this part,
For I am the beauty
and the beast
but in the end, what I choose to see
For I am the good
and the bad
Yet, I am what I choose to be.
You are not the "normal 15 year old," you are far beyond. At your age , this is a great observation. We do all have two sides. I find my darker, more sinister me comes out when I'm alone. I don't like that side of me. To counter it I try keeping myself busy. The rhyming pattern is so well developed and smooth.
Thanks.
Very interesting observations, poetically expressed here. We all have the power to do good or evil...none of us are perfect, but we all live with that choice inside us. A very good write. Well done!
Hello,
I'm just a modest girl with common interests.
Just a normal 15 years old teenager.Writing is a way in which I can speak up for my opinion in this world.
That's why It's my life.
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