A message to goal

A little message to my aim.... and a tribute to everyone who dares to dream big.

Hey, goal!  How do you do?  This message is especially for you.  You seem very lonely,  from where I see  So, I am coming to give you company  Hard is Path, Journey is long  I am alone all along  surrounding you are thorny pains,  cliffs, caves and stormy rains.  Shivers of fear, Sweat of struggle  covered by thick, clouds, pitch dark.  I was told, I am getting in trouble  when I chose you as my mark.  Yes, you are truly far  placed on a mountain tall  but don’t underestimate my power  don’t you take me as small  For shears of my determination  will cut through thorns in my way  on wings of my imagination  I’ll fly over cliff of dismay  My wisdom shall light those dark caves  in storms, courage shall be my cover  I will find whatever it takes  I am coming to you, stop I shall never  Soon, my goal, I’ll be there  I know you are achieved by some  The same glory, I shall share  Look out for me, here I come.

Author's Note

It's personal message to my goal. No matter how far you are... i'm coming to you.

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

What an inspiring message! The idea alone is warm enough to make me smile. I understand the feeling of feeling like your goal is slipping right between your fingers, then sitting there and give up. But then I remember that theres a goal out there waiting to be reached, waiting for me to grab hold and use it's blessings to the best of my ability. I have a dream--no no wait, everyone has a dream. Only those who truly want it will seek it out and make good use of it. Yet another inspiring piece. 100/100

[Thea]

"Hard is Path, Journey is long
I am alone all along
surrounding you are thorny pains,
cliffs, caves and stormy rains. "
This poem is definitely inspiring!!!
It is true that we should never give up...Nothing is wrong with trying...No matter what outcome it might be...
A very brilliant piece...
I enjoyed reading it!
:)))

[Nessa Aurinko]

This is fantastic! I love the message it gives, and the upbeat way in which you put it. Great job.

[Hoosier Belle]

I must just start this out and say WOW I am so overwhelmed by this write
So much truth and matter in this deep rooted write.
The 7th stanza is just simply amazing. You are a wonderful
talented writer.

[.]

I like the personification of your goals..nice idea..well executed

[Sashalee]

good poem :)

[Me]

Great poem!