Chapter 8 Danyel and Evelyn want wings Who Else?

  The cool air caresses me and Ashes face. We fly over the library and I look down at the playground to see a teenage couple having a little... fun lets call it... on the rocks near the back.

  " Note to self, don't sit on the rocks tomorrow." I say to my self. It was saturday (very early) Morning. I go to the library and then go to training during the afternoon. me and Ash land on the beach. I take off my sequn zebra stripe flats and run to the edge of the ocean. The waves lap at my feet. I suddenly feel two handsgrasp my waist. I gasp.

  " The water is as beautiful as you." says Ash. I blush and lean into him.he wraps his hands around my waist and hips. I place my hands on his. He kisses my head over and over. I turn around and kiss his lips. he doesn't pull away. I stop and pull my face away and stare into his dreamy dark blue eyes. He smiles and nuzzles my cheek with his nose. I wrap my hands around his waist and hug him close.

 

  I wake up Saturday morning from memories and dreams from last night. I look at my cell phone. 9:09 AM. I stretch with a well rested sigh and take a shower. I brush my wet hair an pull on a pair on capri's, a tank top with slits in the back for my wings, and a shirt that has a dinosaur saying " I'm a dinosaur so like rawr and stuff". I fit my wings through the slits on the tank top and put on the Dino shirt. I grab my bag full of finished books and walk off to the library.

 

I text ash to meet me at the town hall to fly to training at 2:10 pm. I walk to the library doors and meet Danyel and Evelyn. Evelyn smiles and I see her canines shrinking into her gums.

  " you already know huh? " I say to Danyel.

  " yup." she says. My wings twitch.

  " hi Hannie!" Evelyn says

  " Evelyn... I can give you wings for a day... If you want..." I wisper in Evelyns ear.

  " yes, do it out back... no one is there... It's still early." she says back.

 

  At 12:00 Pm Evelyn and I run to the play ground.

  " are you ready?" I ask, scatching my wrist. It is suddenly really itchy.

  " yes." says Evelyn. I make a triangle with my fingers and say " Wings for a day ". suddenly, just like the dummy, Evelyn glows and golden wings appear on Evelyn's back and slowly fade to Purpley black perfection. I smile, satisfyed with my work and turn around, only to Danyel's stunned face with her jaw almost hitting the pine needle covered ground.

Reviews

[guiltyascharged]

That's amazing! Capitalization still needs work ( " yes." needs to be "Yes." for example) but nonetheless a great hook!