chapter 6 a Magical-frantabulous-maraculos-difaful new trick!

chapter 6 a Magical-frantabulous-maraculos-difaful new trick!

A Chapter by Hannie

  We are flying through the clouds, me and Ash , off to another day of training. i look behind me to find Ash blushing.

  " what?" I say and he bursts out laughing.

  "when u fluttered ur hands u looked like a lil' birdie" he says thugh his laughter.

  "well Evelyn didn't know what DA stood for." I say sternly.

  " oh... It's still funny." he says blushing again.

  " why do you keep blushing?" I ask.his action said it all. he flys up next to me and kiises me on the cheek. I blush and put me hand to my cheek.

  " oh... " I say.

 

  We land and go inside to meet our trainer.

  " today, young dark angels, i will be teaching you both the way of giving others temporary wings." she leads us to an area usually used for fight training.

  " what you do is say' Wings for a day ' and make a symbol," she foms a triangle with her fingers "and press it to the person's back." she does exactly as she said and the dummy glows. and of a sudden, midnight dark wings shoot out of the dummy's back.

  " woah-ho-ho!" says Ash and me.

  "Hannah, you try." The trainer says. I do as she told us and, once again the dummy glows and wings shoot out. at first, the wings are gold and gradually fade to a beautiful purpuly black perfection.

  " good job Hannah." says the trainer.

  " WOAH! how'd u make them gold?" says Ash.

  " I dunno." I say shrugging my shoulders.

   " Ash. Your up next." says the trainer.Ash does the hand symbols and says the spell but the wings only come out black, like the trainers did.

   " good. good. Tat's all for today... uh... Hannah... can you... stay for a few minutes? I need to talk to you." says the trainer.

  " uh okay."  I say. i walk away and ash walks to the main door and sits on the bench. I am taken into a dark room lit by torches.

  " how did you make the wings on the dummy gold for a minutes?" asks the trainer.

  " I-I don't know... It just happened." I say... scared.

  " okay. the trainer says " wait here." she walks into a small room. I drop to my knee's and scooch to the door and put my head on the door.

  "I'm telling you... she is strong... the chosen one... to defeat the evil light angel king. the wings she made for her lesson turned gold at first and then cahnged to the type od dark angel wings of our goddess. and also the dummy glowed supremely bright." I get up and the trainer walks out.

  " You can go now. " she says and I walk away. I meet up with Ash.

  " what went on." he askes.

  " I'll tell when we are up in the air." I say and we run, Hand-in-hand and dash into the sky.



© 2011 Hannie


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:| eergh more teachery stuff lol jk

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Well, it was good. Very interesting. Work on grammar, punctuation and capitalizing.

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