Chapter 5 It's friday,Friday Every ones talking 'bout FRIDAY!

I hear my alarm go off. It's 6 am on a friday morning. I pull on my jeans and and a shirt taht says " dude i like what i like" and put on my make up. I eat my break fast and walk out the door to school.

 I wish I could fly, but I'll probably get caught. I say to my self.

  "HAAAAAAAAAAANNNAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" WAAAAAAIIIIITTTTT FOOOOORRRR MEEEEEEEEE!" I hear Ash yell as he runs down the side walk." *pant* Hi Hannah... * gasp pant* " manages to say through gasps.

  " hey Ash." I say " are you okay?" I ask leaning my face closer because his hair covers his eyes.

  " a kiss would make me feel better." he says. I kiss his cheek and he smiles  that smile of his.

  " so, Ya ready for school?" he asks, kiss me on the cheek and holding my hand.

  " yup." I reply. we walk to school, hand in hand.

 

  " HAAAAAAAAANNNNNIIIIEEEEEEEE!!!!!!" Yells Evelyn as she runs down the hallway. Ash comes over and takes my hand.

  " hi." I say to him and Evelyn.

  " uhh... Hannie... Who's that?" Evelyn asks.

  " This is my boyfriend, Ash." I say. I lean close to her " He is like me with the-" I stand and make a flapping motion with my hands.

  " oh." Evelyn says. she leans close to me " he is really cute."

  " I know." I wisper back.

  " okay gossip girls, lets go outside." says Ash.we walk out side to the court yard.

  " ash," I say. " this is Evelyn, she is a vampire."

  " Cool. DON"T BITE ME!" he says.

  " don't worry I only eat Hobo's and nasty animals." Evelyn says.

  " Crap, 2:10, Eve ash and I gotta go, we have DA traning."I say

  " DA?" she replies.

  " Dark angel." I say. I wave,grab ashes hand, and run.

Reviews

[guiltyascharged]

This love is way too kiddy and innocent. I hate it. I like your story, but again, your copying 'Chronicles of Vladimir Tod' and 'Maximum Ride'. Work on your punctuation and grammar, already.