Chapter 4 Evelyn's a WHAT NOW!?!?!?

  "A vampire?" Evelyn says.

  " Yea- yeah..." I say

  " Yey whats up with your back?" She asks her fangs had shrunk down

  " Uh um uh..... Nothing....." I say... " Hey no changing the subject! Why didn't you tell me you were a vampire! HMMM!?!?!?"

  " I was afraid you wouldn't like me anymore!" She says her expression changing into a really sad one.

  " Oh..." I say.

  " What is on your back any way?" She says instantly swooping around to behind my back feeling my wings. " Are these..."

  " Yeah... their wings... " Say stretching them to full extent.The expression on Evelyns face was priceless. Her eyes were as big as dinner plates. Her mouth was so open it could hit the ground.

  " C-can you actually FLY with those?" she asks.

  " Yea-yeah..." I say.

  " Lucky..." She says

  "Yeah..." I say." I can... do... other things too..."I say change and see the rainbow colors swirl around me and feel the soft breese.

  " See." I say after I have turned into Starshine.

  " Wow!" Evelyn says, bending down to pet me." awww your so soft!"she says

  "Heh thanks..." I say. She stops petting me and I transform back.

  " Now that is cool..." Evelyn says.

  " Oh crap it is 3 am... I gotta go, by Hannah.." Evelyn says

  " Bye!" I say jumping up and flying back twoards the direction of  home.

Reviews

[Hannie]

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[guiltyascharged]

First of all, this is so copying. You're mixing 'Chronicles of Vladimir Tod', 'Maximum Ride' and 'Twilight' all into one, changing it up a bit, and calling it yours. That's not right. And second, WORK ON YOUR SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION! You REALLY need to. I'm not kidding now. I'm serious, work on that stuff.