Chapter 3 When will "normal" be Normal?

We land near an abandond building so no one will see our wings and we walk over to Cumby's. we walk in and go over to the fountains. He pours me a diet coke and pays for it.

  " Here you go." Ash says handing me the soda.

  " Thank you Sir. your jinx, " I kiss my middle and fore finger and make and "X" in the air " Is broken."

  " Yay!" Ash says. He puts his hand down, Accidentally laying it on mine. I blush but don't pull away. He blushes and smiles.

  " Um, we should get going back ho-" I start to say

  " Home? yeah we should..." He says. We get up and start to walk home.

  " So... uh... Hannah?" Ash says breaking the thick silence between us.

  " Yeah?" I reply.

  " Your uh um... uhhh... your... pret...pretty..." Ash says.

  "Uh... Thanks? now tell me what you really wanna tell me!" I say

  " I did!" He says the red on his cheeks deepening.

  " No you didnt I can tell!" I say.

  " Okay... fine.... I like you... alot.... and I w... wanna go out... with you..." He says stuttering.

   " Oh uh... I like you too....." I say

  " Enough to go out with me?" he says.

  "Yeah..." I say.

  " Well... Hannah, will you do the honors of going out with me?" he says.

  " Yes." I say. He hold my hand leans in and kisses me on the cheek. I smile. He walks me home and I go inside.

 

 I wake up and look at my cell phone. 12:00 am.

  " Ugh." I say. I feel rested and look to my right to see my sisters sleeping ( and snoring") body. I get up and pull on some jeans. I open my door and go into the drive way. my wings fwoosh out and i jump off the ground. I fly over evelyns house and see a person... Biting another person? I swoop down and tand with a soft tap.

  " uh? " say and the... person... turns around, and I see the face it's... Evelyn!?!?!?!!

  " EVELYN!?!" I exclaim. Her face is covered in Hobo blood and she has long bloody fangs protruding from her mouth.

  "Hannah... It's not what it looks like!" she says

  " Are.. you.. a..." I start to say.

Reviews

[NotEasilyBroken]

Unlike the comment below I actually enjoy this it gets better and i love the ending. But please please make longer chapters (: Oh and work on typos. I do them alot aswell which is why I proofread and proofread again! lols. Nicely done (:

[guiltyascharged]

This is annoying me now. You need to pick up on your writing. It's never going to get published like this, I'm sorry, but it's not. You need to edit this. The love is too sweet and too innocent, blech.