Chapter 1, first day o' training

Chapter 1, first day o' training

A Chapter by Hannie

  "Hey guys how are you?" I say. I set my bag down on the long green grass of the court yard. A soft warm june breese brushes my skin.

  " Hannah your late!" says Evelyn. " you promised to come earlier then usual."

  " Oh, sorry.. heh..." I look at my cell phone, 2:10 pm. Oh crap im gonna be late I promised Ash I would meet him out side the arena before training...

  "Uh.. Eve I go-"

  " I gotta go Hannie... see ya later..." Evelyn dashes away.

  Whats up with her.. well good thing she had to leave. I love her but I cut it waaaaaay to close. I pick up my bag and run to a secluded area. Fwoosh go my wings as I unfurl them. I jump and flap to keep balance and shoot into the air.

  "Heh see you decided to finally start flying?" I hear Ash's voice say behind me.

  " oh shut up" I say. I turn around to see Ash's face with his smexy look on. Ash is another person like me. he has bl...

  " OH. MY. GOD!? what happened to your hair... it's BLACK!" I say suprised.

  " My hair was origanally black I dyed it blonde and dyed it back. How do you think I was called 'Ash' in the first place?" he said.

 " Oh hah." I say, embarrassed. we land in front of the arena and walk in.

  "Young angels are you ready to learn your first techniques and powers?" Our trainer said.

  "Yeah" we say in unison.

  " Jinx" I say " You owe me a diet coke!" I say.

  "okay I'll go with you to Cumberlin farms and buy you one. " Ash says. We follow the trainer into the training area.

  " Today you learn shape shifting." the trainer says. " Hannah, think of your cat or dog or... pet and say silently Change!"

  I do as she says and see a swirl of rainbow colors and feel a warm breese.



© 2011 Hannie


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to Make Me Beleive: XP sorry i wanted ta get it down!


Posted 13 Years Ago


You have a great start here! Love what it's about. needs just a tiny bit of editing! Excellent story line!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Damn damn damn. I like it so far but you REALLY need to work on capitalization, spelling, and punctuation. Really, you do.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hannie
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