Promise

Promise

A Poem by Hannah

An incorruptable promise of happiness and light,
a burning ray of sun that pierces the haunting night.

An infrangiable embrace of love and desires,
a peaceful sanctuary amongst the dark betrayers and liars.

A perfect paradise to indulge in serenity and bliss,
a chance to abadon the misery I will never miss.

A rare reason to awaken with a genuine smile,
a powerful urge to forever stay awhile.

An amazing excuse to gift my fragile, feeble heart,
a constant longing to never drift apart.

You presence in my life has become a dream like gentle haze,
that rescued me from my cruel, twisted maze.

You were constantly there helping me through,
so now I will do anything I can for you.

I thought I was incapable of loving again,
I thought I would always be consumed by pain.

You brought me to life with your piercing stunning blue eyes,
and your perfect face stole me away without any tries.

The peaceful days and thrilling nights we spend together are the best,
the definition of happiness compared to the rest.

I was drowning in an enternity of numbness with no emotion,
but now my feelings for you are as powerful as the roaring, thundering ocean.

Your jokes, your soul and your whispers in my ear,
are beautiful and rare and is why I remain here

You are unpredictable, special, respectable and your morals are divine,
I'm so glad I met you, I'm so glad you're mine.

It's impossible for me to have feelings for anyone but you,
I really love you I can't believe this is true.

You make me feel good about myself, you make me want to be me,
I don't feel insecure with you, how can this be?

You smashed down my walls, then stole my heart and my mind,
you fixed me and made me yours, so please never leave me behind.

© 2012 Hannah


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This is stunning really,

"An infrangiable embrace of love and desires,
a peaceful sanctuary amongst the dark betrayers and liars."

Really like this part in particular. Very poetic and amazing,
yoru feelings just pour out. Nicly written.



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