Fate

The calm atmosphere was disturbed by my painful cries,
as I realize I'm imprisoned in a world tarnished with lies.

You are my life, you are my everything, I love you even though I shouldn't
even though you don't love me and it's obvious now that you wouldn't.

I'm desperately struggling to decide what to do,
do I finally define how I feel to you?

I'm like a piece in a evil malicious game of chess,
each small move is significant and determines the outcome of this mess.

It's like I'm trapped in a tall building being swallowed by fierce deadly flames.
Do I burn? Or jump? These are the choices in fates sadistic games.

I'm screaming hysterically I LOVE YOU in my mind,
so why can't I utter these words and witness what I find.

I abandon all hope by insisting that you will never love me,
but you loved me once so I should consider it maybe.

Today the radio tortured my heart by playing our song,
I pathetically crawled away which I knew was wrong.

My thoughts are consumed by you every day and every night,
I am stunned and confused as to how our love ended after one fight.

I want you, I miss you, I need you this is obviously true,
so why can't I simply confess that to you?

Reviews

[iamkim]

It's quite weird why people can't say what they really feel towards somebody even if the badly want to (sigh). I can relate to this. Very good write Hannah!

[JENY]

very sweet poem....
sprinkled with very confidential...and intimate..feelings...
how nicely you have written it!
kudos to the poet...you are...

[Midnight_Mystery]

excellent!

[Sarah McConnaughey]

The wording, flow, and emotion is simply amazing! You described everything so beautifully! Thank you for sharing. :)

[Julie Beth]

this was outstanding i loved it :D

[Fontane Wong]

A fantastic and awesome expression. The emotion of this poem is well written. I love it so much, for real. Really heart touching one. A amazing and excellent piece of writing!!!!!!!!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was awesome! The emotion stress of still being in love with someone thats gone wrong and you don't know how to make it right once again, excellent writing here!

[Hello, Goodbye]

fantastic poetic expressions..

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I'm screaming hysterically I LOVE YOU in my mind,
so why can't I utter these words and witness what I find.

I abandon all hope by insisting that you will never love me,
but you loved me once so I should consider it maybe.

You really caught my attention and related well to general mishaps.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Today the radio tortured my heart by playing our song.....oh I know this well. Excellent Hannah!