Run

Run

A Poem by Hannah

You run relentlessly in my dark twisted maze,
and stumble  through the dark cruel branches in a dream like haze.

You notice the black night swallowing the stars in the sky,
and the eerie glow of the moon glaring at you like an eye.

Demons are concealed in the menacing shadows spraying poison like fire,
their evil inhuman behavior makes the situation dire.

The intimidating bushes threaten to consume you in  a deadly embrace,
but you continue to run bravely in this dangerous cruel race.

I realize now who are my real friends,
so now the story involving them ends.

No one is supporting me, but I knew you would.
So I will be as kind to you as anyone could.

The girl that messed with you wasn't me.
It was a psycho insane person who I try not to be.

I thank you for everything and with you I have fun,
so keep on sprinting through the maze . . continue to run.

© 2011 Hannah


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Hannah, you speak real TRUTH in this. Friendship keeps on coming at me strongly, with the acceptance of life being difficult, but life having to be difficult for a greater purpose. Continue to run, even though it's a dark twisted maze.
I am really impressed , because on your profile it says you are only 15.
Much wisdom. Impressive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very interesting poem. I like it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


cynical come to mind first the persona is having cruel fun with this person not a very nice poem but one that is in some cases true to life, Life isn't always pretty but then it wasn't meant to be

Posted 13 Years Ago


We run away from the nightmares, but then we find a true friend who helps us face the realms of a beautiful fantastic dream.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice rhythm and rhyme. I felt a true frienship in this story.
Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful....
life itself is ....run....
liked this piece of writing very much...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good job my dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is really good great job i loved it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice write, well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very interesting poem. Easy to fall to lies and fake dreams. One day you will wake-up and be alone.
"Demons are concealed in the menacing shadows spraying poison like fire,
their evil inhuman behavior makes the situation dire."
A lot of people are like mice in a cage. Not wanting to know there is a escape out. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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