Just Go.

Shut up.

Get out.

I honestly don't care.

 

Lying to you.

Lying to myself.

I honestly do care.

 

I don't give a crap.

About you.

About her.

About any of you.

 

I'd give my life.

For you.

For her.

For any of you.

 

Take your stupid sympathy.

Your failing comfort.

Your lack of attention.

 

I need your sympathy,

Your comfort,

Your attention.

 

Take it,

Take it all,

And get the hell away from me.

 

Please don't leave me,

Please don't go,

I need you to be near me.

 

I say it's tough,

And it's going to get tougher.

 

I need you all,

Now more than ever.

 

It may not seem it,

Not often,

But I hate you.

 

It may not seem it,

Not often,

But I love you.

 

Walk in,

Turn around,

Walk out.

 

Walk out,

Turn around,

Walk in.

 

II don'tdo needneed youyou.

 

Just Don't go.

Reviews

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

I think this would be better described as a poem the way the format flows. I like the opposition of the last two lines. The whole poem is like a description for what you say and what you really mean when you say those words. It's a singularly opposing piece where two sides of you clash on what you actually mean. A very well written piece.
-Twilight

[A Spectacular Case]

I really like this Hannah, it's my favourite of your stuff, nice one.

[octane143]

I love the opposites in this piece. The battle of love/hate. We all feel this way sometimes, and you did a great job of capturing those feelings that are always boiling under the surface of what we say vs. what we want to say.